Nine Steps Towards Short Story Success

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Study Magazines - Rosemary Gemmell
Study Magazines - Rosemary Gemmell
Even successful writers have work returned unpublished. There are nine steps a short story writer can take to improve the chance of success.

Most short stories writers have their quota of rejections. In a competitive market, it pays to put a little extra work into pleasing the editors and their readers. Some of the following suggestions might make a difference.

Read Published Stories

Some writers try to sell work to magazines without reading the kind of stories they publish. This is basic market research and should be the first step for beginners. By reading published stories, a writer will start to absorb the structure and tone of the stories that particular editors prefer. Guidelines are fine up to a point, but it is better to read the actual stories in the magazine if possible.

Study the Target Market

Study at least three issues of the chosen market in depth. This covers the following:

  • Advertisements, all of which have been targeted to the particular readership.
  • The letters and problem pages, which reflect the ages, issues and interests of readers.
  • Editorial and features, which give an indication of the type of reader being addressed.

Submit a Story that Suits the Publication

This is often one of the most difficult things to get right, and it is one of the main reasons why so many stories are rejected. Having studied the published stories in the targeted magazine, it is essential to understand whether they use the short, popular type of stories, or the more thoughtful, insightful kind. Submit the preferred length of story, the age range of characters, and their type of background and jobs.

Decide on the Viewpoint

When beginning to write short stories, it is probably best to stick to one point of view throughout. Writers should be careful not to change viewpoint in the middle of a paragraph. If the story is told from two characters’ points of view, it is best to make this clear by separating paragraphs with an extra double space when changing viewpoints.

Experiment with First and Third Person Voice

Sometimes a writer chooses to write a story in a particular voice by instinct. Often it depends on the type of story, as some naturally lend themselves to first person more than third. If a first person story doesn’t work, writers can try writing it in the third person. It is worth experimenting with rejected stories, as a different voice might be more successful.

Look out for a New Editor

Magazines often suddenly change their staff. Editors move between publications, and new people are regularly appointed to the role. Sometimes, it means there is no longer a short story slot in the magazine. At other times, it is an opportunity to resubmit a story that was previously rejected, as editors have different tastes. This is another reason to keep up to date with chosen markets.

Try Competitions

Competitions offer an opportunity to submit stories that might not fit a magazine. There is probably more chance of being a winner in the smaller competitions, or those that are fairly new. Many writing magazines have a monthly competition. There are also competitions online, some of which offer publication as well as prize money. Many are open to international writers.

Check Overseas Markets

There are many overseas short story markets available to writers. The most well known are probably in America, Australia, Canada and the UK. Previously published stories may be submitted to some, if the writer still holds all other Rights. It is a courtesy to mention if the story has been published. A few magazines offer a slightly lower rate for these, but it is still good payment.

Keep an Ideas Book

Many writers have a good idea but forget it by the time they find a pen and paper. It might be a title, a line from a song, or a brief outline for a story. The important thing is to keep everything in a notebook, or loose-leaf folder until needed, rather than on scraps of paper. A particular subject or theme might suddenly suit a competition, for instance.

There are still many short story markets at home and abroad. But the competition is rising each year as new writers try to be published. It is essential to keep up to date with publications and to give editors the kind of story their readers expect. That way leads to success.

Rosemary Gemmell, Simon Gemmell

Rosemary Gemmell - Professional freelance writer of published short stories and articles in the UK, US and online. Author of historical romance and ...

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Jul 11, 2010 1:04 PM
Guest :
This was not helpful at all! I want to know more! what do i do after i find an editor? do i find a publisher? do i send my editor's work to my publisher?
Feb 16, 2011 9:46 AM
Linda Noon :
Hi Rosemary

I'm fairly new to S 101 and was just having a general browse when I came across your article on tips for writing a short story. I found it very useful as it confirms most of my instincts. I am still seeking the kind of publications that would like the stories that I tend to write, which are a little more towards the thoughtful insightful kind. It is good to know that there could be some editors out there that are seeking these, although I haven't found them yet. The other thing that I cannot get my head around are those stories that end with a twist and where everything else gets almost swamped by it. I am not short of story ideas but I am put off when I cannot think of a twist.

Regards

Linda Noon
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